Anytime I'm feeling down I find myself coming back to this.. :B
not half-bad, few things i'd suggest working on though;
-the expressions/reactions of the characters are quite underwhelming, which can negate from the joke entirely
-the delivery was kind of monotonous and flat, as if you yourself didn't find the gag all that amusing.
-*please* don't use that laugh track sound effect. its like the wilhelm scream at this point.
-the joke itself was pretty weak. :/
you have potential though, keep it up my dude.
honestly great. i only wish hartrup wasn't so gosh darn mean to oatboy.. :(
did you seriously reupload this just to get a better rating?
I really don't care that much about the rating, I prefer reviews! But yeah, I did reupload it because the first time around it was a little blurry and what do you know, it still is :/ It's newgrounds though, the movie is a lot clearer on my computer.
oh yeah, and I edited the movie so that it can loop indefinitely(there was an intro transition and credits, I took the, out).
Your style of storytelling is way beyond perfect, please have my children.
fuckin perfect. i think the improvised nature of this is what truly makes it, keep oop der uber werk.
but did he enjoy it
I love your stuff man, character design/animation style in particular.
My only real complaint is the video length. It'd work much better as a full one-off 10 minuter, rather than having pieces scattered throughout.
I'm guessing you just wanna release what you can, as often as possible, which is cool. Perhaps release all parts (or arcs) into one compiled video, that'd be cool.
Thank you so much! Because there are chapters of webcomic pages in between the animations, they wouldn't make much sense all strung together. But a compilation video would he cool in the future, once I've completed all of the planned videos.
While I am a fan of your style, I think you'd have more luck on here by investing time into more long-form content. Potential is there, though :^)
i know, but i am lazy :(
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